English Assignment 1 - A Diamante Poem
Assalam o Alaikum!
I'm Sumran Shahid and This is my Diamante Poem.
Hope you like it XD
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Sumran
Thoughtful, Creative
Sleeping, Learning, Eating
Drinking Tea all-day
Running, Playing, Judging
Fresh Confident
Sportsman
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Hey Sumran, seems like you are a personality of contrasts: being creative but not fresh concomitantly. Yet, glad to know that you are not judging despite being thoughtful.
ReplyDeleteNice choice of words in the poem. And the choice of opposites was also very good it was a nice experience reading your poem. Well done!
ReplyDeleteYou have delineated yourself in a nifty and superb way. And your superfine words yield marvellous comeliness to your poem. Nice job dude!
ReplyDeleteSportsman?
ReplyDeleteIts amuzing to hear that your opposite is a sportsman, anyways nice poem.
ReplyDeleteWell written...Sportsmann??...nice pic btw
ReplyDeleteNo doubt,you are creative bro!
ReplyDeleteA poem beautifully composed. All the words used, give a clear picture of your attributes. I also like your approach while choosing your opposite. Not only did you tell the readers about yourself in the first part of the poem but the second part also adds to your description. Rather than the description of your opposite.
ReplyDeleteA very good description of your character in the poem.I figure we have something in common,I'm also a tea lover.Good work!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written
ReplyDeleteHi Sumran. I am really quite impressed with you and your poem. I am looking forward to meet you.
ReplyDeleteAmazing piece written. Keep up the good work
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